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27 October 2005, 01:59 PM

This is a story that I am starting. Pease rate my story after evey chapter and not in between the rating scale is from 1-10

1-2 worse than sith spit
3-4 bad
5-6 moderate
7-8 good
9-10 like oh my god this story is like oh my God !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME

27 October 2005, 02:10 PM
Ch 1 Darth Vader

The door slowly opens with ease, showing Anakins face and body glaring at the younglings. One younglin ggets up and runs over to Anakin who had a helpless face on him. One youngling speaks up "Master Skywalker theres to many of them what are we going to do?" Anakin raises his lightsaber to the redied position. He goes for the Ignition button and clicks it on bvvvvvvvvv. The youngling

27 October 2005, 04:01 PM
Uh... This probably belongs in the FanFiction forum. So as not to encourage anything for anyone, I shall reserve my judgement until after it has been moved to thte proper forum.
Well... that, and because all you've got so far is a re-telling of events in RotS.
The aforementioned forum is here (http://holonet.swrpgnetwork.com/forumdisplay.php?s=&forumid=10)