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Yan Kai
10 January 2006, 01:27 PM
I'm going to use Jax Nova's idea.

Please post any comments for "Days of the Old Republic, Do You Dream in Darkness, A life of Death or the Death of Life, and To Walk a Dark Path" here.

Yan Kai
12 January 2006, 11:07 AM
What do you [anybody] think about my last story "To Walk a Dark Path?"

Jax Nova
12 January 2006, 11:19 AM
Just finished the last post. I like the story line. It's not the average "Save th World" plot and it's believable allso. Nice job.

Yan Kai
12 January 2006, 04:28 PM

Jax Nova
14 January 2006, 02:58 PM
so how soon are you comming out with the next one?

Yan Kai
14 January 2006, 06:58 PM
I'm working on it now. I always type my stories completely before I start posting them.

Jax Nova
16 January 2006, 11:11 AM
I see. Well, I will be waiting.

Jax Nova
18 January 2006, 12:20 PM
Just finished reading the last/ first post on "The way of the Sith"

I injoyed it. Keep it up!

Yan Kai
18 January 2006, 12:47 PM

Jax Nova
20 January 2006, 10:39 AM
Just finished the last post.... smuglign Sith Lords, nice twist. :)

Yan Kai
20 January 2006, 07:24 PM
Thanks Jax. I actually have Arrey's entire life planned out in detail from age 5 through 18. She doesn't get older than that. The smuggling of Sith lords actually plays a big part later in her life.

Jax Nova
21 January 2006, 06:43 AM
That's cool!

Yan Kai
27 January 2006, 06:47 AM
I finished posting "The Way of the Sith." What do you think?

Jax Nova
27 January 2006, 10:11 AM
Just finished the last posts. Great job!

I liked it alot realy. The only thing is that the end seemed a little abrupt. But that's not always a bad thing just an observation. I also liked how you told what happened to everyone (the important people) afterwards and all.