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Jax Nova
1 February 2006, 11:40 AM
THE AGE OF DARKNESS

The morning sky has turned to black,
It's wonders sinking low.
The light in life has been pushed back,
The Dark begins to show.

Though skilled with sword and skilled with mind,
There might we could not kill.
Now all that's left for us to find,
Is the dark side's cold chil.

"With thunderous apluase" this age will die,
Drowning out our despret calls.
For our loved ones we all cry,
The age of Darkness falls!

This is just a poem that I wrote about Episode 3. Hope ya all like it!

Yan Kai
1 February 2006, 12:22 PM
Bravo! I could naver write poetry well at all but I respect anyone who can.

Jax Nova
2 February 2006, 11:58 AM
lol thanks. Glad you liked it!

PsychoInfiltrator
16 February 2006, 08:08 AM
THE AGE OF DARKNESS

The morning sky has turned to black,
Its wonders sinking low.
The light in life has been pushed back,
The Dark begins to show.

Though skilled with sword and skilled with mind,
Their might we could not kill.
Now all that's left for us to find
Is the dark side's cold chill.

"With thunderous applause" this age will die,
Drowning out our desperate calls.
For our loved ones we all cry,
The age of Darkness falls!


Spelling fixed. :) It was bugging me.

Jax Nova
17 February 2006, 11:15 AM
Sorry about that.... Spelling is not one of my strong areas...

Jonas Malcume
22 February 2006, 07:36 AM
Loved the poem Jax. I've written poetry myself(although I've never about Star Wars before). Good job.
:xwing:

Jax Nova
23 February 2006, 10:04 AM
Thanks. Glad you liked it! :) I write poetry alot and thought it would be interesting to write something about star wars. So I decided to do it. :)