Vanger, Terras: I started a new "version" (v4) of Coruscant Vacation, and sent it via GMail to you two.
Vanger, since you definitely
I got CV pt II up, covering everything up to/through the Cracken visit; I have some stuff for the return trip, so V4 will be bouncing your way soon.
Ash and company were picked up outside the apartment by an air limo, which whisked them to the sprawling office and base complex of the New Republic Defense
I've added a sizable bit, we're now up to v3-3. Ash, you might get it twice as I probably got the label for Terras' YeeHa! Incrate wrong.
v3-2 is back to you. I think it's mostly ready for posting. There should be a brief depart Coruscant/return to Tirahnn bit, which I can do, or you can,